Scripting.

Bit one: From first establishing shot to when she goes to bed. 
Sitting in bedroom on computer - playing music on her ipod through earphones. 
Saffron: (Sings along to song quietly.) 


Bit two: From when she wakes up to when she goes out. (time lapse) 
Mark: "Hey, how are you?" (enthusiastic) 
Saffron: "Hello. Im alright thanks, you?" (wary but happy) 
Mark: "Better now i'm talking to you."

-Flash back- 

Girl: "How are you today?" 
Mark: "Better now i'm talking to you."

Girl: "Mark, you were supposed to be my friend." 
Mark: "I know, Im sorry." 

-Normal time- 

Saffron: "Aw"

-Time change- 
Saffron: "I'm so glad i met you. I feel like i can trust you with anything" 
Mark: "You can"

-Flash Back- 
Girl: "Of course, i trust you. You know that"
Mark: "I know"

Girl: "I trusted you Mark. Why?"

-Normal time- 

-Time change- 
Saffron: "Sorry, mum said i have to take Lucy out"
Mark: "Oh, okay. I'll talk to you later"
Saffron: "Bye"


Bit three: From going out to kidnapping.  
Saffron: "Alright Lucy, just be careful" 
'Mark': "Hello Lucy" (Takes her hand and walks her away) 
Saffron: "Lucy?" (Panicked) 
Lucy: "Saffy."
Saffron: "Lucy" (relieved) 
Saffron: (screams)  

Bit four: End. 
Saffron: "I trusted you"
Mark: "I know"