Final Plan Feedback.

Positives:

• It's a great narrative because it could happen to anyone. 
• Excellent message. 
• Interesting plot idea. 
• Good message with an interesting plot. 
• Good idea. 

Negatives: 

• There is quite a bit to happen in the time period of two minutes. 
• Might be hard to maintain continuity over the week of filming. 
• Continuity? - webcam sequence. 
• Is there enough time to fit it all in? 
• Theres a lot to get through in just the opening. 
• Don't make murder too graphic as it could look to horror like. (think of thriller conventions and look how it cold be effectively portrayed.) 

Other comments: 

• Put 'based on a true story' at the beginning for extra effect.